Closing the Deal

fucking for the deal

enjoyed it very much. yes this can happen in real life. My wife works as a broker & yes she has done it afew times. but the guys only do it if she wants it. All ladys are sluts at times. yes guys size dose matter to most ladys don't fool yourself. would love to read the next chapter in this story.

To put it simply,,,,

it's crap.

Agree with Saratu - crap.

I hate a husband that will put up with something like this unless they started out their marriage by being this way.

Absolutely worthless

Your worst story by a mile it would only have been redeemed if you had given an epilogue of a newspaper clipping stating that Charles was found murdered in his recently bought house.

"1"

Never thought I'd ever score one of your stories this low. Too bad, there isn't a "0" score.

Where's the Zero

With all the Zeros in this story you would think they would give us a zero option in the star voting!!! Well written as usual HDK!

This is not attractive

Even the style is heavy. Perhaps you should take this one down?

Well written -

The story was well designed and implemented - I think they are both losers in the long term and he is going to regret where he is heading -

She has no self control and that will beat him down -

That is just where my head is at at this point -

Good writ9ing and I do not have to agree with your ending to have it provoke thaought

Stop mumbling in your stories

And swallow! Can we get AIDS of the eyes reading this story??

you can't get AIDS but

you can get rephilled with jism, stick a cock in each end, suck and shimmy and you'll be all set - maybe if you are lucky one of your rephillers will infect you.

Even

though it was a short story, I wasted time reading this piece of shit.

next in series in Anal

I trust the next installation of this series will be in the Anal category. Very hot, but not very pleasant! Agree that their future love life will be different (perhaps too different.)

Please!

Slut wife and Fag husband.

complete and utter shit

I just lost a hell of a lot of respect for you HDK. I am saddened and disappointed that you wrote this slimy shit.

closet cucks out in force

Those wannabe cucks are ruining HDKs life by "losing respect" for him, LOL! Self-important closet cuckolds, no fucking life whatsoever!

And she needed the $50,000 that bad? I thought they were in good shape, financially?

She wanted to fuck this man. Slut! Her husband sold her for his part of the commission. I was in R.E. sales many years ago, I never got offered deals like that, LOL! Perhaps because I am a man. I'm glad this is just a story, I hate to think that low of people.

You know...

I consider myself a generous person. I do good works, donate to charity, help out others, and so forth. Hell, I'm willing to share my last crust of bread, or even to do without, when someone I care about is in need. With that said, a wife is not a crust of bread, nor an item to be bartered, traded, or lent. When that is done, then it's not longer a wife but a cheap piece of ass. Granted, ass is nice, ass is great...but I wouldn't trust any facet of my life, let alone 50k, with a piece of ass. I don't figure one can buy true love and loyalty, so in the story, were I the hubby, I think I'd rather lease the ass and keep the 50, then go off and find someone else more important and worthwhile to be with.

Is this story really properly sorted in the loving wives category? Maybe fetish is better fitting, don't you think?

Rubbish ! Absolute rubbish!

No star!
A galaxy of rocks

What a piece of horse shit.

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Crap

I was always of the belief that if I had nothing good to say than I should say nothing. I have to go against my belief and say that this story is a piece of crap and beneath your usual standards.

Gag

I've been going down the list of your stories and was happy with them, until this one. Any husband, hell even boyfriend, that would do this is worthless. I actually recreated having read it. Please warn readers if it's going to be about a wimpy husband so they won't waste time reading unless they are looking to validate their own cheating.

Bullshit...

She cheated, sold herself for money and the husband accepted it, pimping her...What a couple...He should have entered the room and kick the shit out of him...That's what a husband would have done...

Disgusting!

He should have come out of the bathroom and thrown the creep out!

And tell the slut that if he ever THOUGHT that she was even THINKING about doing something like that again that he would throw her out!

And if for whatever twisted reason he DID accept this situation, there should be no way he goes NEAR that sloppy cunt, but take her ass instead!

Somebody needs to like it!!!

I didn't think it was half bad! If that had been my wife doing that I probably wouldn't have been so understanding - but the commission that earned her paid for her trouble - and now her husband, who has a fair sized cock himself, has learned how to really please her. I'm sure that made him wonder if she'd been fucking and sucking other guys for years!!

What a bitch

How could her husband sty in the restroom if it was my wife I would have ame out and ut his balls off. And if my wife was going along with it then she hd done it before, and as I would be going to jail for cutting off his balls, I would make sure she never fucked again

I think HDK was deliberately tweaking the LW police with this one

This story doesn't fit in with the rest of his stories. Perhaps he just wants to tweak the LW trolls. I did like the comment that hubby should have come out and chastised her for spreading aids around.

Right

What a pair a fucking whore of a wife and a WIMP of a husband. If I were her husband good ole Charles would have been on his knees after I broke his fucking jaw then, I would have left that whore standing there as I left to see a lawyer. I hate these frigging wimp husbands who get turned on by watching their wives get pounded. no real man would ever settle for that. Unless they were some sort of sissy boy.

Minus 3 *

HDK is a sick arseluk! Cheers!

My first post, and it did suck the big one.

I admit it, but I leave it up as a barometer of sorts. it shows my humble beginnings and my slow but steady growth into a major asshole over the years. it isn't easy pissing so many people off, but I manage. I do appreciate all comments and they never upset me, unless they are about others. Online insults really don't have much effect, but compliments work wonders. Constructive criticisms are the best comments to receive. Thanks to anyone that reads and/or comments.

What a whore

A husband encouraging a whore, especially if the whore is his wife, is never acceptable. Very bad ending.