Need more of this couple. Want to read of a menage-a-trois with the husband
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Anonymous03/22/04
OK for this type
Nothing new, but nothing excruciatingly bad either. Anymore would just be repeating what already happened.
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Anonymous03/23/04
So Close
Nice effort! A little more kinky and you'd have the reader right where you want.
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Anonymous03/23/04
GREAT STORY
PLEASE HAVE MORE OF THIS TYPE OF STORY.
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Anonymous03/23/04
deserves a second chapter!
enjoyed the story although the wife gave in a bit too easily and perhaps it would have ended better if hubby stayed where he was and did not give the game away (ie stayed hiding) leading to more 'spying' on his 'changed' wife. Still looking 4ward to the next chapter if there is one and wander if the wife will wander lend herself more to other offers.....
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Anonymous03/24/04
great reading
I loved this story. Please continue this story.
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Anonymous03/25/04
Good BUT
started offcwith good story line, but unrealistic middle to end. While realtors have been known to go the last mile to close a sale, don't think the scenario could end up as written. Have had personal experience once as buyer and one as mate as realtor and.....all things are possible to close a sale but "brut force" and humiliation isn't one
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Anonymous04/20/04
story
closing the deal was boring. maybe with a little less introduction
This one is not up to your standards! Just another wimp husband story! Sorry!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
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Anonymous03/23/05
Disappointing!
How can an excellant writer like you lower yourself to writing a pile of wimpish shit like this. The horny teenagers can write this kind of garbage, Please save your writing for something half way decent. The Ct. Yankee
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Anonymous03/23/05
Tough Luck
to the usual crowd of Loving Wife Whiners. This author is his own man and not your shill. He's written several stories lately that happened to cater to the cheaters-must-pay gallery--though I suspect he's catering to no one, but just having fun and stretching his skills with different variations on these well-established themes. Now the shoe's on the other foot and, tough luck, but it pinches, eh? Better get used to it, because you're never going to confine HDK in your little box.
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Anonymous04/09/05
Different Taste
Most guys would not like being a wimp cuckold married to a woman who fucks other guys for money. I guess if you don't mind the occasional case of the clap, or dieing of aids it is not too bad.
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Anonymous04/15/05
The story is so stupid.
What nonsense, No one is going to pay more than $10 for an overweight 45 year old woman. Women that old buy it; they can't sell it. Even at thirty, they have to give it away.
A man that ran a call girl operation was on a talk TV show. Most of his girls were teens and very early 20s. A lady asked him if needed anyone about 30. He said no. She said that men tell her they like older women. He said, "Lady, the men are just being nice. There is no demand for anyone thirty."
definately below your usual standards. the only thing you missed was for wimp husband to lick Chas. cum out of her.
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Anonymous05/05/05
What a load!
Not much here, and what there is is trash. Far below your usual!
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Anonymous09/22/05
Attitude of the Cuckold
The only thing that bothers me about this story is the Idea that a man could still love his wife after witnessing her being a slut. Get excited and aroused yes want to do her yes but I can't see his still loving her. It would just be sex after that. Can't see him even liking her much any more. But then I think his last line might give an insight into how he feels. It clearly indicates he is going to put her to work as a whore. Seems to show very little love or respect for her is left. What the H would their home life be like after that. Can't imagine his being to concerned for her feelings after that. Perhaps the author should do a story on how a couple would enteract after such a revelation and how they would wind up for better or worse. Would feeling of lust and revenge destroy them.
Been better if the husband would have gutted the whore with a machete when she turned around. And then hunted the author that created him and put him in such an unfortunate position.
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Anonymous09/09/06
the look of betrayal
I think the husband should plant that into the wifes brain if she screws another she`s done with him
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
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Anonymous12/15/06
I think that
After the client was finished with fucking the wife. The husband should have walked in and said to his wife..."You
know you and I are not supposed to be fucking other people since we're both HIV positive." It would have been fun to see a controling bdsm freak freak out.
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Anonymous04/01/07
God isnt it great to be married to a whore!
Just think this guy really has no money and is HIV positive but has learned real estate salesladies are easy marks and dont worry about protection. And they are so greedy they will do anything for a sale!
He cums outta the closet (bathroom) and gets in touch with his inner wimp.
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Anonymous09/09/07
CRAPOLA
HDK's stories are getting worse with each submission and I think he should now lay writing to rest, maybe to grow some balls
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Anonymous09/23/07
from holland with admiration
Seeing the earlier comments I was more then amused.I can't recall a writer that had these kinds of comments of his
readers. Arguing about this story like it were real events and not fictional ones. I think it is a real compliment to the writer meaning that he creates strong, realistic, and almost existing characters in their natural environment. Remember, nothing is impossible, there is nothing that hasn't been done before. So all of these stories can be real as well
Peter Olie
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Anonymous03/12/08
wow
if you guys dont like it stop reading i thought it hAd GREAT detail!
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Anonymous04/10/08
me personally i hate these kind of stories
i hate a husband whoring his wife.marriage hard enough trying too make it without bullshit.
HDS is one of the best writers here at Literotica and his writing and character development in this story are as good as always. That said, I find it hard to believe that any man who really loves his wife could react as this husband did. Open marriage or marriage of convenience, maybe, but definitely not the reaction of a loving husband finding he has a "Loving Wife"!
HDS is one of the best writers here at Literotica and his writing and character development in this story are as good as always. That said, I find it hard to believe that any man who really loves his wife could react as this husband did. Open marriage or marriage of convenience, maybe, but definitely not the reaction of a loving husband finding he has a "Loving Wife"!
No hint yet to what would later turn herds of fans (me included) to open the page of any new story by HDK with undisguised excitement...
It could serve as a great lesson to any aspiring writer - don't be discouraged by the time it takes to learn the tricks of the trade - even the champions had to warm up for a while...
Very hot stuff for the most part. As a 'loving wives' story, it comes up short on loving. Husbands and wives can have totally open sexual relations for all I care, though the couple in this story obviously never made such an agreement prior to the wife's cheating as she perceived it. The utter disrespect that both men treat the woman does not turn me on when it comes to consenting sex stories, and this woman clearly gave consent. The disrespect and name calling fits better in nonconsent/fetish/bdsm stories in my opinion. If this story had been filed under those other categories, I'd rate it 100%. Since there's no actual loving in this 'loving wives' tale, I have to downgrade the rating. Very hot stuff nonetheless.
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Anonymous08/20/09
Pathetic!
Sorry I wasted my time.
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Anonymous11/09/09
Good story
If so many complainers dislike this sort of story, why do they read them? This was well done.
No one forces anyone else to read about cuckolds. We're a specialized group.
fucking cuckold wimp i would hav beat both of them 2 an inch of there death and i would cut his dick off and rammed in the cheating whores mouth . that aint no man hes a gay wuss
You should make a series out of this couple along this storyline. Readers need to know if this was the first time she yielded for signatures and whether their sex life improved or not. If she has a price, it sounds like $50,000.00. It seens certain hubby does not mind. I really liked this story.
This story is pathetic. For her to just give in and her husband to just accept it, makes this one sad, patetically bad story. Yoou usually do better, but this time you failed miserably.
English
Great tale!!!
Need more of this couple. Want to read of a menage-a-trois with the husband
OK for this type
Nothing new, but nothing excruciatingly bad either. Anymore would just be repeating what already happened.
So Close
Nice effort! A little more kinky and you'd have the reader right where you want.
GREAT STORY
PLEASE HAVE MORE OF THIS TYPE OF STORY.
deserves a second chapter!
enjoyed the story although the wife gave in a bit too easily and perhaps it would have ended better if hubby stayed where he was and did not give the game away (ie stayed hiding) leading to more 'spying' on his 'changed' wife. Still looking 4ward to the next chapter if there is one and wander if the wife will wander lend herself more to other offers.....
great reading
I loved this story. Please continue this story.
Good BUT
started offcwith good story line, but unrealistic middle to end. While realtors have been known to go the last mile to close a sale, don't think the scenario could end up as written. Have had personal experience once as buyer and one as mate as realtor and.....all things are possible to close a sale but "brut force" and humiliation isn't one
story
closing the deal was boring. maybe with a little less introduction
To bad
Just your typical cheating slut/forgiving wimp story. It's hard to believe that this is the same author that wrote "Tit For Tat".
Wimp Cuckold
Just another wimp cuckold story.
Weak!
This one is not up to your standards! Just another wimp husband story! Sorry!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
Disappointing!
How can an excellant writer like you lower yourself to writing a pile of wimpish shit like this. The horny teenagers can write this kind of garbage, Please save your writing for something half way decent. The Ct. Yankee
Tough Luck
to the usual crowd of Loving Wife Whiners. This author is his own man and not your shill. He's written several stories lately that happened to cater to the cheaters-must-pay gallery--though I suspect he's catering to no one, but just having fun and stretching his skills with different variations on these well-established themes. Now the shoe's on the other foot and, tough luck, but it pinches, eh? Better get used to it, because you're never going to confine HDK in your little box.
Different Taste
Most guys would not like being a wimp cuckold married to a woman who fucks other guys for money. I guess if you don't mind the occasional case of the clap, or dieing of aids it is not too bad.
The story is so stupid.
What nonsense, No one is going to pay more than $10 for an overweight 45 year old woman. Women that old buy it; they can't sell it. Even at thirty, they have to give it away.
A man that ran a call girl operation was on a talk TV show. Most of his girls were teens and very early 20s. A lady asked him if needed anyone about 30. He said no. She said that men tell her they like older women. He said, "Lady, the men are just being nice. There is no demand for anyone thirty."
disappointing
definately below your usual standards. the only thing you missed was for wimp husband to lick Chas. cum out of her.
What a load!
Not much here, and what there is is trash. Far below your usual!
Attitude of the Cuckold
The only thing that bothers me about this story is the Idea that a man could still love his wife after witnessing her being a slut. Get excited and aroused yes want to do her yes but I can't see his still loving her. It would just be sex after that. Can't see him even liking her much any more. But then I think his last line might give an insight into how he feels. It clearly indicates he is going to put her to work as a whore. Seems to show very little love or respect for her is left. What the H would their home life be like after that. Can't imagine his being to concerned for her feelings after that. Perhaps the author should do a story on how a couple would enteract after such a revelation and how they would wind up for better or worse. Would feeling of lust and revenge destroy them.
Uhhhmmm
....
worst HDK
Poor story, poor subject matter, piss poor husband.
Would have
Been better if the husband would have gutted the whore with a machete when she turned around. And then hunted the author that created him and put him in such an unfortunate position.
the look of betrayal
I think the husband should plant that into the wifes brain if she screws another she`s done with him
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
I think that
After the client was finished with fucking the wife. The husband should have walked in and said to his wife..."You
know you and I are not supposed to be fucking other people since we're both HIV positive." It would have been fun to see a controling bdsm freak freak out.
God isnt it great to be married to a whore!
Just think this guy really has no money and is HIV positive but has learned real estate salesladies are easy marks and dont worry about protection. And they are so greedy they will do anything for a sale!
Er... um
I'd comment but I was raised to believe that, if you've nothing good to say, you should keep your mouth shut.
Oh for fucks sake...
I don't know if this was satire or irony, but I'm sick to death of these sort of fucking stupid... fucking hell, why bother.
Cumming of Wimp story
He cums outta the closet (bathroom) and gets in touch with his inner wimp.
CRAPOLA
HDK's stories are getting worse with each submission and I think he should now lay writing to rest, maybe to grow some balls
from holland with admiration
Seeing the earlier comments I was more then amused.I can't recall a writer that had these kinds of comments of his
readers. Arguing about this story like it were real events and not fictional ones. I think it is a real compliment to the writer meaning that he creates strong, realistic, and almost existing characters in their natural environment. Remember, nothing is impossible, there is nothing that hasn't been done before. So all of these stories can be real as well
Peter Olie
wow
if you guys dont like it stop reading i thought it hAd GREAT detail!
me personally i hate these kind of stories
i hate a husband whoring his wife.marriage hard enough trying too make it without bullshit.
Writing A+ Ending B-
HDS is one of the best writers here at Literotica and his writing and character development in this story are as good as always. That said, I find it hard to believe that any man who really loves his wife could react as this husband did. Open marriage or marriage of convenience, maybe, but definitely not the reaction of a loving husband finding he has a "Loving Wife"!
Writing A+ Ending D-
HDS is one of the best writers here at Literotica and his writing and character development in this story are as good as always. That said, I find it hard to believe that any man who really loves his wife could react as this husband did. Open marriage or marriage of convenience, maybe, but definitely not the reaction of a loving husband finding he has a "Loving Wife"!
No Words are Needed
but crap!
hated it!
I truly hate these kind of whimp ass stories...
Certainly 'an early HDK'...
No hint yet to what would later turn herds of fans (me included) to open the page of any new story by HDK with undisguised excitement...
It could serve as a great lesson to any aspiring writer - don't be discouraged by the time it takes to learn the tricks of the trade - even the champions had to warm up for a while...
Quite Erotic
Very hot stuff for the most part. As a 'loving wives' story, it comes up short on loving. Husbands and wives can have totally open sexual relations for all I care, though the couple in this story obviously never made such an agreement prior to the wife's cheating as she perceived it. The utter disrespect that both men treat the woman does not turn me on when it comes to consenting sex stories, and this woman clearly gave consent. The disrespect and name calling fits better in nonconsent/fetish/bdsm stories in my opinion. If this story had been filed under those other categories, I'd rate it 100%. Since there's no actual loving in this 'loving wives' tale, I have to downgrade the rating. Very hot stuff nonetheless.
Pathetic!
Sorry I wasted my time.
Good story
If so many complainers dislike this sort of story, why do they read them? This was well done.
No one forces anyone else to read about cuckolds. We're a specialized group.
Just a cheap whore
Pimp her out to the dogs. Once shes to loose dump ass in niger town naked and leave her there.
nothing cheap about this slut
With the commission she will be getting for the sale of that property, she ain't cheap.
As for her husband, he also gained a slut, and probably what he wanted her to be all along.
Thanks for the good story.
What a loeser
FUCK YOU LOUSE!
fucking cuckold wimp i would hav beat both of them 2 an inch of there death and i would cut his dick off and rammed in the cheating whores mouth . that aint no man hes a gay wuss
One of the few bad stories in your archive!!!
Gezzz! What happened? We like to read about husbands with balls, not wimpy cuckolds.
Somewhat,
Disapointing after all the other stories that you were writing before, and now this wimpout. I don't understand it.
Disappointed
I am disappointed in this story. She's just a highpriced whore.
Serialize this storyline!
You should make a series out of this couple along this storyline. Readers need to know if this was the first time she yielded for signatures and whether their sex life improved or not. If she has a price, it sounds like $50,000.00. It seens certain hubby does not mind. I really liked this story.
Well done -
I don't like it nor them but it is well written and deserves the stars -
ARE ALL MEN IN THESE STORIES GAY
Not your finest hour
This story is pathetic. For her to just give in and her husband to just accept it, makes this one sad, patetically bad story. Yoou usually do better, but this time you failed miserably.
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