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by legerdemer05/03/16

I'm there

walking the streets, watching the lights, smelling the smells and seeing the sights. It's got a film noir feel to it. I especially love this one.

One question: is it possible you may have frogotten a 'to' in this line?
"The evening lights used (to) glow here;"

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by Angeline05/04/16

This is wonderful

I have to love a poem that is so well written it makes me wrinkle my nose when bad smells are mentioned! Just great and evocative writing!

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