A College Girl's Conversion Ch. 02

More please

Both stories are well written and exciting....hope there is more of the same and some added wrinkles......how about the girls recruiting a couple of beautiful freshman girls for the enjoyment of themselves and Kalu...looking forward to more stories.

Made Me Melt!

I read Ch 1 of this when it first came out and thought it the hottest story I had ever read here. So I was very excited to see Ch 2 pop up! I tempered my expectations since I thought it would be hard to match Ch 1. All I can say is you have done a phenomenal job! Really, beautifully hot and sensual. It had the same tone and atmosphere of Ch 1, but with new dynamic. I loved the build-up with Sara and Emmi's friendship and girl talk. And the way you switched their positions dancing was a master stroke! From there I just melted and was swept away to the very end! The ending was so subtly intense. Congratulations on a spectacular sequel!

One of the best

Erica does it again. Her prose and erotism are second to none. Keep them coming

Ericawetdreams...

God more please!!!!

Smokin'

The breeding plot line has me ready to blow. One suggestion: learn when to use the word "complementary" vs. "complimentary."

Thanks!

My gosh, you're right! I will correct it ASAP. Thanks.

-E

When I read it in the first time, it caused an emotional overload to me. Now I'm sure you're a professional writer of romance novels in disguise. I've read many excellent stories here, but your fictitious characters live in my mind. Please, more!

Excellent representation of friends sharing

I love sharing a black lover with girlfriends. xoxoxo Annette

Keep it up!

Keep it up Erica! Your writing is excellent and your interracial is so refreshing compared to so many of the stories of black guys treating women horribly on here.

Wow!

OMG! Hot! I love your stories! I got so wet reading and could barely breathe. Very few writers here can tell such an erotic tale while keeping it believable. Sara and Emmi are adorably realistic! I can hear their voices and their personalities shine through. The thought of such pretty "good girls" falling under the powerful black man's spell so as to desire impregnation is extremely arousing.

Holy shit

OMG. That was so fucking hot.

i love this story

more please! your stories are so hot.

Brilliant

what a truly amazing story. Great composition, grammar, imagination and good flow to the story

WOW what a hot story

And to think they only have 2 mote years of college together. Surely Erica there is more story to add to this? I enjoyed the writing, the insights of Sara.

Thanks for a great story.