All Comments on 'Concubine'

by Geoff Chaucer

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
A new style genre

Very new style of writing... a new genre set in china with "magic". Good read =)

Kanga40Kanga40almost 20 years ago
Different...

and very readable.

Spoiled for me by your image of "bull's balls".

Have you ever seen a bull's balls? I have, having bred cattle for many years.

AND I can assure you that it is hardly likely any wonam couls insert two bull's balls into her vagina.

You would not hide one in your hand. Just imagine something, kidney bean shaped, around five to six inches long and three inches in diameter in the middle.

Now try putting two of those inside a woman, AND have enough room for them to rattle around.

Sorry, that one metaphor spoiled the whole story from then on.

Use metaphors and similes you know something about.

Then again, maybe they have VERY small bulls wherever you are?? LMAO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
a nonny mouse

I am not an authority on "bulls balls" but I am a good judge of writings. This story was a very pleasant surprise and I look forward to future submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
hmmmm

kimonos are japanese, not chinese.

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