In Japanese: Basudekado

Japan took Lord Vasudeva from

India & Nipponized him into Basudekado !

TWINS OF THE SAME MOTHER

and a soliquy for the diary. TK U MLJ LV NV

A lovely love poem from a father to his daughter, Neo. I have one too who by the way has visited her step-brother there, a career naval officer. They're both very fond of the culture.

One quibble: Although I'm not a big fan of ending sentences with a preposition, I think S3L2 would have sounded better with "of" and I was left wondering if it was intentional or an oversight.

Very touching

A sweet gift, Neo - they are a marvel, aren't they? A clean and moving write.
Minor quibble: I do agree with gm on the 'of' in S3L2 - the line feels cut off as it stands.

Beautiful!

Your spare, precise poem tells a love story that has only grown stronger with time. That's a lot of depth for such a spare, controlled poem but it is unsurprising to me given your ability. Anyway how can I not love it? I remember when she was born. Lovely work, Jamis.