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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
nice

original situation set up. very creative. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Brilliant

Clever premise and hotter 'n hell! Would love to see more of this naughty wife!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
A good example of how to write one of these

I see so many comments asking why those who post negative comments to loving wives stories read them at all. This is a good example why. Most of us aren't opposed to the genre, just finding the same plot with different character names. This is a creative way of writing such a story and avoiding all of the cliches. Coming up with this twist on the genre took some thinking, some effort, and it shows.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Yes, anon below, BUT

the wife is still just a whore to suck off the cop quite so easily. Any real life husband would just drive of and leave the slut there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Interesting but a little too short

Also quite unrealistic...would agree that the husband

should have dumped her on the spot and left her with

the policeman.

gdavisgdavisabout 20 years ago
Short and sweet, but not quite there

I think its brevity is one of its better assets. An inventive premise, but the author should have developed the couple's dilemma, and not allowed the conflict to be resolved so easily. But I can see a lot of potential for the characters.

russeltrustrusseltrustover 18 years ago
Very hot!

A great story; it is an inspiration to my own work. I've listed it as a favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
good

that´s good, natural and flowing type of story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
enjoyed it

gr8! thx

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
she gave in to quickly

She has been doing this for quite a while. Without a blink of the eye she's sucking off the cop? Then rationalizes it away without any effort or guilt. She has been doing this for years now. The husband is always the last to know. But he now should know but does not care which makes him a WACC.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
No.

I would have killed the cop for a start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Superbly done.

She is a grat wife.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
She is

She is an whore. In appearance and.in fact.

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