All Comments on 'First Time For Two Ch. 02'

by T@nman

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doer19doer19about 20 years ago
Good story

A good story line but not enough passion in what was happening. Too matter of fact. Doer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
needs to be longer

Good start, but need page 2,3 and more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
very hot

I think it's pretty hot, just like the rest of the body of your "work". Keep up the "hot stuff"!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hot stuff

Loved it. Want to see more. Keep up the hot stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lovely!

That was very nice. An interesting story of mixed sex with a lovely touch of love.

Thanks, mate.

Peter

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 14 years ago
Great, great, great

I know this has been here for a long time but I just found it. I've read a lot of your stuff and really love it. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Friends, Good Sex

It was just really nice and sexy for three good friends to enjoy themselves. This should be an inspiritation for all of us to enjoy life and good friends more.

catamitecatamiteover 4 years ago
Fabulous Trio

One of the most erotic first time stories here; well done.

Anonymous
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