by My Erotic Tail
As usual your story telling is superb.The charactors are so real.
A great gift lives inside you.
Annora
a very sexy scene and some natural interplay here. All very good. I only spotted one stray apostrophe and a couple of other typos, but all in all an excellent story here. Well done...
jim : )
If you sent this to hollywood doyou think they could work it into the next jackie chan movie?