Michelle's Shows Her Pair

E

Isn't bigger than DDD

Not going to win any literary awards, but surprisingly erotic nevertheless. Maybe I'm just a sucker for 'girls taking what they want' stories, but I reckon this was a good first effort. Four stars.

Got the job done!

More please, also E isn't actually bigger (not that I give a shit)

E is the same as DD, DDD is F, so bigger than that would be G.

Misspelled words

I'm picky on words being spelled correctly. Some commentors are confused about cup sizes.

It's a cute, believable story.

Thanks for all the feedback folks, the story was written in one sitting on a whim.

The cup size issue wasn't realized until after I submitted the story. Also, if that matter has been commented upon several times in the spots above your comment-- safe to say it need not be raised again, the error has been duly noted.

As for the grammatical errors and mis-spellings, there were too many to go unnoticed. This was my first submission, and I wasn't sure if the editors took care of those things before approval. In any case, if i write any more, a greater effort will be made to avoid grammatical and spelling mistakes.

Hope the story was enjoyable for what it was.