Shemale Intern

Very hot

The flirting was well written, great build up and the sex was hot. I feel like it was a bit rushed, and I would have liked to see them dating rather than have a time jump. Other than that though, I really liked it. Hoping to see more maybe.

Amazing.

Tender and sweet. What a great build up to a super hot ending. Thank you so much for this story. You're the best!

Sweet and Hot

Thank you for the story. I very much liked the build up and the eventual exploration of each other.

5 stars as always!

I can always count on any story with the Lara Longstaff name being awesome! I have seen your work on Smashwords so if folks want to support this writer's skills that we have all enjoyed here thanks to her generosity and the folks at Literotica, please do! I plan on doing that myself afterI tend to give money to those silly things like water and electricity.. Whiskey had it right, this one felt a bit rushed but most readers who never post anything here may not be aware that 3 pages on this site often means anywhere between 8 and 10 pages in word. Great work! Thanks again to you and Whisky for sharing your talents!

Hotter than the sun

Fuck this is one hot story - absolutely incredible.

5/5

another chapter this is a real nice story 5 stars

Great story

I hope you'll turn this into multiple chapters, what great characters. Really well done.

Envious

The story of my dreams. I've had my experiences with transgendered gals but nothing like the eroticism and emotional involvement like this. Great story. Wish I was Rob

More!

Please add to this already great story!

Beautiful

Desparately envy her. Anonymous that dreams of being Rob, drop me a line by email if you wish. Love to chat to a man like you. Xxxx
Cherie

Outstanding

Certainly one of the best stories on here. Thanks for your hard work and creative mind. Cheers.

Series

Amazing. the kind of story that deserves a series.

Fantastic story! I don't normally read this type of stuff but by the end of it I found myself desperate to be Rob and please his friend yet again. Excellent work.

Excellent

A totally believable story, something that's not often possible in this grey zone of writing and lifestyles. I liked the caution of Maddie and the open mind in Rob to explore and not judge. That's how it should be.

Not to push but I think there's at least two more installments possible with this couple. Thanks so much!

Great story

Found my jealous of Rob! Would love to read a sequel...

fantastic

Lara once again a fantastic story. could it have been a little longer yes but it was still fantastic. You have this way of drawing us into the tender side of the story with the subtle little hints of romance and passionate. By the end of the story we all want to be Rob and experiencing his desire to please her in ways that even he didn't know that he could. We need more writers like this and of course more ladies like the intern to make our dreams come true. I do hope that you plan on writing another chapter to this series.

Yo, I liked how believable your work is, and how you show your characters rising above the bigoted shit we deal with on a daily basis... which is why it pains me to understand why you still use terms like 'shemale'... its not only unrealistic, as you'd be hard-pressed to find any trans women who self identify as shemale, but it can be hurtful and dehumanizing when its used as a slur in our everyday lives to paint us as some sort of sex object or pervert

amazing!

Amazing story. Very erotic! Please write a part two!

Too funny.

"Johnson, Schwanz and Steele" LOLOL Too funny.

Enjoyed the story immensely.

Typical lawyer, you can tell he's lying as his lips are moving

'It was there that Rob, back in town from litigating a case on the East Coast, ran into the new intern for the first time... "I'm Robert Crane. I'd have met you already, but I'm just back in town from LA," he explained.'

She should be rightly sceptical of this one. It's no wonder that the only people we trust less than lawyers are politicians... and half of them are lawyers anyway. :)

That said, Madison looks to be a sympathetic character with a good head on her shoulders. I'd be curious where this goes once she gets her degree and enters private practice. And yes, the use of "shemale" in the title here, on Smashwords and on Amazon is unfortunate; she's a person, not a caricature from some pornographic freak show. The story reflects that well, to the point where the title detracts from it.

Extremely Hot

I really liked this story, the interaction between Rob and Maddy seemed unique when compared to several others in this genre I've previously enjoyed. Thanks for creating and sharing this with us.

OMG

WOW that was one hot, awesome, story. Thanks for sharing !!!!!!

fantastic story, more please! Just wish I could find a Maddy to play with,

I love your writing

I really enjoy the way you write your stories. I was worried that the big cock stuff would turn me off as I do tend to de-emphasize mine most times and it isn't very big. The way you write is super fun and I love your characters and their interactions. Very sexy. Thank you

Great Story

Hot and very sexy, thank you ;)