Crave Pt. 01

I kind of didn't understand the sequence of the story. Separation between what the 2 characters are saying and their actions should be better established

Was she a virgin? Did they use protection? He is not a snuggler, is he?

Did you read this after writing it? Too many holes, confusing...

Loved it

The story made perfect sense!! I could understand the flow and there were no holes I. It for me~ I loved it please make a part 2more intimate if I may ask?

Love it

I loved it, so erotic! More please.

Part 2 coming soon

I am in the process of writing part 2. Please be patient with me. I leave a few things to interpret on your for those who felt there were holes. ( Disclaimer: I am not a professional writer and only do this for fun)
They did not use protection
Lol no, He's not a snuggler (his sexual appetite does not allow much room for that, which you'll see in pt 2) she is not a virgin but sex happens few far and between for her due to her being so much into her school work.

Thank you So much for for even reading this and actually loving the story I hope you love the 2nd part even more or better than the 1st. Hope you all enjoy.