All Comments on 'A Quiet Evening'

This is very well written, dark and very interesting stuff! Well done, and thanks for sharing, hope you write more stuff in the future!

droll women.

Otherwise an interesting tale, although it needs the back up of a strong editor.

Nice first story, hope to see the sequels.

Very good for a first submission.

Cant wait for more!

Erotica + Horror = BRILLIANCE!!!

I read the other's comments, and wonder whether they see your vision as I do. For me, it is not about you telling a story and dragging me along to see things your way. It is about you challenging me to look within myself and to bring into focus those reflections that I have long carried thru life, and to incorporate them in my further efforts to write. For that, I thank you, as you have expressed certain things in the interaction between the hero of your story and the being that captivates him that will prove invaluable in my own effort to appeal to others via my writing. Well done, and I hope you will keep it up- erotic horror needs more folk with gifted tongues to help it become an object people need not feel squeamish about...

Calli