All Comments on 'Condominium Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
yawn

As usual, a fine part one stretched beyond belief or hope. Your first part was erotic - this is just boring.

I've never read a story here that has survived beyond two parts. I can't understand why people go on and on - up to 50+parts.

Egotism, I reckon. Certainly not literary merit. There is artistic skill in knowing when to shut up!

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
It's about fantasy...and why not!!!!

Keep doing what you are doing...sure enjoy your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Need Some Asian Women Characters

Love the story line, but the characters seem kind of similar. If you decide to continue the series, suggest you bring in some Asian women for variety and to spicen it up, either single or married. One could be a reluctant participant at first and then totally goes for the lifestyle.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Needs some extra descriptions

I really loved the story up till now, but I would suggest to elaborate some descriptions regarding the anal and DP in more erotic way

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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