I stopped reading as soon as "Andy" revealed this was set in India. Why don't you fuckers make a your own website and stop submitting your shitty stories here? If you spoke better English, you might realize how fucking horrible your writing is. And I swear, your names sound like you picked them by assembling random groupings of Scrabble pieces. Which is why the characters in this tale were named Andy and Christy.
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Anonymous05/13/16
anon coward
we should make this top story!! , for good comedy and to rile previous commentator. its fucking porn not Shakespeare loosen up.
Andy is not my actual name... I just chose an AKA for submitting my story... There's a reason why I chose Andy and I am happy with the name.
But Christy is real ,but still my story is not entirely true.
And if you don't like my language please stop reading it... That's all
Like he said it's just porn... And I ain't no Shakespeare
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Anonymous05/15/16
from the old one
Epiphany_Jones is undoubtedly a well educated and cultured person as is obvious from his comment. There are a few Indian writers e g., Misterwho who rank among the best in terms of style and narration. And there are a few abysmal writers too from the subcontinent. I have not failed to observe that the average Writing skills of English speakers is not all that it should be!
Dont listen to the retards here. Rated you 5 stars for the effort
Keep writing more about Christie and others,you do have a flair for writing. well done
Make big black Tamil woman wear low navel saree showing their belly and wearing skimpy blouses
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Andy?
I stopped reading as soon as "Andy" revealed this was set in India. Why don't you fuckers make a your own website and stop submitting your shitty stories here? If you spoke better English, you might realize how fucking horrible your writing is. And I swear, your names sound like you picked them by assembling random groupings of Scrabble pieces. Which is why the characters in this tale were named Andy and Christy.
anon coward
we should make this top story!! , for good comedy and to rile previous commentator. its fucking porn not Shakespeare loosen up.
Thanks who ever it is...
Andy is not my actual name... I just chose an AKA for submitting my story... There's a reason why I chose Andy and I am happy with the name.
But Christy is real ,but still my story is not entirely true.
And if you don't like my language please stop reading it... That's all
Like he said it's just porn... And I ain't no Shakespeare
from the old one
Epiphany_Jones is undoubtedly a well educated and cultured person as is obvious from his comment. There are a few Indian writers e g., Misterwho who rank among the best in terms of style and narration. And there are a few abysmal writers too from the subcontinent. I have not failed to observe that the average Writing skills of English speakers is not all that it should be!
5 stars
Dont listen to the retards here. Rated you 5 stars for the effort
Keep writing more about Christie and others,you do have a flair for writing. well done
Make big black Tamil woman wear low navel saree showing their belly and wearing skimpy blouses
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