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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
This is pretty.

I really like this series of phrases:

A lusty gust lifts the branches

playing a laughing melody.

Then, a zephyr passing

makes shimmer sounds.

I can see the reflection off the glass dancing in the wind. Thanks

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