All Comments on 'Mr. Joe Whuzzit Ch. 09'

These read like diary entries. There's no story, no dialogue, no conflict, no nothing. Pointless.

Had you actually read any of our stories you'd know that they were created from notes shortly after the events happened then actual stories. Some were mailed and shared with "Pen Pals", others just filled away.

Lit rules caused us to rewrite them using shorter paragraphs but the basic stories are as they happened.

These aren't movie scripts, they're real life events.

Also as told here over and over and over and over, most were written as told at a camp fire, a small bar, or anyplace kinky friends gathered.

I could make something up to make you happy!

Thanks for reading and commenting. We do try to make readers happy.