Bossing the Boss Ch. 06

although I prefer the earlier parts (more NC, humil.) a nice story... maybe you could go on in the old tracks when the waitress gets on stage again. Yet: Thank you for quite exquisite Entertainment :-)

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I love the turn you took, personelly I was getting a little tired of the Suzanne plot, I relly like the way this is branching out. Keep it up.

interesting

Maybe Jodi can have some fun humiliating Suzanne! I'd love to see some public humil for that bitch!

A wrong choice for mine

The whole point of a mind control story is that the person has no control themselves. For the person to be complicit in herself being used takes the power away from the fantasy. There is a natural path for this series to take and that is to link up Jodie and the boss, otherwise its just about Tom taking advantage of a sub.

Total Control

I agree, the boss still has much humiliation to pay for, and perhaps Jodi can join in. While the Jodi situation is an interesting sub-plot that can perhaps be broadened into its own story. This one is about mind control and him getting his revenge and a better life. Now he could perhaps build a harem if you would like to broaden the story. All in all an enjoyable read.

GO FOR IT

Keep going maybe a pet for the boss. A dog for a dog. who knows expand and have fun. No need for any more drugs to control her use the tapes. Obey or lose everything. Turn her into a lost soul.

to wrong choice

I dissagree. the best thing about a good submission story is the self-struggles.
her the humiliation of 'bossing' charichters, the way they fight for their control, is the best feature.