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very conflicting.....
you did an excellent job of catching her fear... and an equally excellent job of catching his dominance. I sincerely look forward to reading chapter two and how it is just as entertaining and stimulating. Jane
All Chapters
I was very intent on your story liking most parts and dreading some even though they fit well in the story line. I read all the chapters as well as both endings...both were very surprising but creativly put together. I would have liked to see her come to grip with her feelings and He also make a turn and attempt more so to win her back by Raymond giving the papers to him and letting her make her own choice but over all I would recommend this as a good read as well as informative. Thank you for giving your fans a great read. a fan
A Fine piece of work
i read the entire story today including all three endings, the favourite of mine was the last, where Leah returned to Carlton to be set free in the same way Raymond set Mia free
great story
im not very good at giving feedback, but i loved the story, very imaginative and well written.
love the whole story
I love all of your stories and have sent the link to your stories to Master. Leah's Bondage is very well written and intrugingly erotic while keeping an interesting plotline. Thank you for your wonderful stories.
Amazing
I read this line of stories a year or so ago, and I never forgot it! You're an amzing writer, all your stories are fantastic.
Excellent
I was searching for a good story about a girl named Leah - as that is my own name. You know, just for some fun. And I'm very glad I found this one! Too bad I'm a blonde though. hehe.
Excellently written and great story line.
I can't wait to read on!
Just Enough
The auction, the drive, the plane--there's just enough information to set the scenes without bogging the reader's fantasy down with excessive detail. I appreciate getting the information more from both POV's, rather than narrative discourse. It all feels very intimate. I like the use of a last name for the dom, it makes him more real to me. Oh, and the fantasy's off to a great start, too. Thank you for offering it here. I'm looking forward to the rest.
please keep writing
please keep writing! after i read Dragon Master i just had to keep reading your stories. they are absoulutly amazing. by far the best ive read. you get the emotions of the people and what the scene looks like. =)
EXCELLENT OPENING CHAPTER
A very good start to an ongoing story. i love how you portray the emotions of both slave and Master. i look forward to reading the rest of your story.
Really arousing
I have discoverd a talented erotic writer here. Oh how wonderfully his vicitms are dragged gradually down into relentless slavery! No future, no hope, only everlasting obedience!
Miscategorized
Such a talented writer, yet so misleading categorizing this as anything but NC. What is the writer's agenda?
I will also be removing your Silence of Need story as one of my favorites.
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