your second part was just as good and stimulating as the first. Thank you for being consistant in your writing. It was very easy to put myself in her situation and feel her pain, confusion and desire. Please write the next part soon... Jane
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Anonymous05/15/05
Butterflies...
This chapter, much like the first, leaves the most pleasant butterflies in my stomach. I can imagine every breath the characters take, and my heart pounds hard along with Leah's as the story goes on.
Thanks for submitting such wonderful words to make me feel this way.
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Anonymous01/12/11
LOVE IT
All your stories are wonderful....love it, love it, love it :)
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Anonymous04/30/11
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this is truly amazing... i felt such a conection to the characters, you wrote me right in to the story ;) i am a leah, and this story is right on track with some of my darkest fantasys. its so perfect. your a wonderful author. kudos!
Often subsequent chapters are not as good as the first, but in this case it is possibly better. A very talented author who for some reason seems to have stopped writing ..... mores the pity.
English
you did very well
your second part was just as good and stimulating as the first. Thank you for being consistant in your writing. It was very easy to put myself in her situation and feel her pain, confusion and desire. Please write the next part soon... Jane
Butterflies...
This chapter, much like the first, leaves the most pleasant butterflies in my stomach. I can imagine every breath the characters take, and my heart pounds hard along with Leah's as the story goes on.
Thanks for submitting such wonderful words to make me feel this way.
LOVE IT
All your stories are wonderful....love it, love it, love it :)
shared name
this is truly amazing... i felt such a conection to the characters, you wrote me right in to the story ;) i am a leah, and this story is right on track with some of my darkest fantasys. its so perfect. your a wonderful author. kudos!
JOY
Often subsequent chapters are not as good as the first, but in this case it is possibly better. A very talented author who for some reason seems to have stopped writing ..... mores the pity.
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