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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/09/16

Romance - Candlelight, wine, and a soft kiss. (14612)

This was NOT romance!

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by trigudis05/09/16

Graphic Sex Alone...

Romance does not make. Anonymous (why some people here won't reveal even their site names is beyond me) is right.

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by Anonymous05/09/16

Good sex scene

This is just a vignette but a good one, although the characters themselves are cloaked in mystery and there is no context. But the writing is mostly sound and I encourage you to build it into a story.

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