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A Boy In Babeland Ch. 05

byNemasis Enforcer©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/26/04

great job

great story are u going to continue with all the sisters and maybe the mom and then one big orgy?

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by Anonymous03/27/04

By far the best chapter

Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous04/17/04

So Hot!!

That is so hot!! keep the story going.

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by Anonymous04/25/04

Unbeleivable

Best story I've ever read. Keep up the good work. I Look forward to more.

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by Anonymous05/04/04

Hot

I loved this story. One of the best I have read on this site. Please add more chapters. Excellent work.

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by Anonymous10/17/06

Good, but not as good as the first four.

A well-written story. Unfortunately, the punctuation (comma use, mostly) and misused words (fourth, not forth) was a bit of a turn off for me. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous02/24/08

Very hot--a 5!!

Overall, certainly a 5. It would add more 'spice' to describe Trish's and Lee's orgasm: how did it feel in more detail? Did Trish's toes curl up? Did she shut her eyes or throw her head back? You get the idea. ;)

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by Anonymous06/05/10

what did they never hear of condoms lol good story though you should mix up the positions every now and then

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by Anonymous01/02/13

Totally UNDERATED

Great story i think more people should post and rate!

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by mthomas6312/27/13

Great Story

I like the way you're going through the sisters one-by-one. Can't wait for the Grande Finale.

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