Ashley's Centaur Escapades Ch. 01

GOOD START

Please continue, I like centaur stories, too many were stories

Yes please write more and could u make it more detailed and longer

You have no experience with horses, I can tell. They have to be able to withdraw completely inside in order to move at any speed. There is no fur at all on the shaft.

Hi Anonymous, thanks for your feedback! I'm trying to improve my knowledge in this area. I was more-so implying the sheath when I mentioned that part of the cock, but I'll admit I didn't word it correctly.

Good story, but could use some, eh...research

As another comment mentioned, horse dicks aren't usually just chillin out. Maybe research that one and accentuate the exciting process of extracting it with lust.

I like the premise, but I think to have a sexual desire only a horse dick could satiate, I'd imagine she'd have to be quite the slut, well versed in physical seduction of herself and others. Aside from a few mentions of her (many) past sexual partners, I never heard what was going on in ashley' body that would merit her to be such a slut. She sounds normal to me. She never got wet, masturbated, felt lonely, angry, afraid, jealous or experienced anything to produce a desire to seek out sexual gratification. As a guy, I do like girls who seek out extremes(HUGE d's), but I still want to hear about the girl's journey to the D. And then descriptively hear all about how it has solved ALL of her problems.
Good writing though, just some thoughts I had. I'ma read the second one now...