What goes around comes around... so who is going to jump Laura's lover's wife's bones (too many possessive nouns... hope author understands)?
by
Anonymous04/01/04
eh?
I'm confused.. is the guy married? You state he is at the start. So he hates his drunk buddy who cheats, so he cheats also? Pot kettle black. Decent enough story if you cleared that bit up, one way or the other.
by
Anonymous04/08/04
Nawty . . . Hot . . .
Previous calls for clarification understood, and ageed with. But the story was still hot ... maybe another Friday adventure will sort things out.
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What goes around comes around... so who is going to jump Laura's lover's wife's bones (too many possessive nouns... hope author understands)?
eh?
I'm confused.. is the guy married? You state he is at the start. So he hates his drunk buddy who cheats, so he cheats also? Pot kettle black. Decent enough story if you cleared that bit up, one way or the other.
Nawty . . . Hot . . .
Previous calls for clarification understood, and ageed with. But the story was still hot ... maybe another Friday adventure will sort things out.
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