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The Captain's Return

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by Anonymous

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by pjw732605/18/16

why is this posted in lesbian sex ??????

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by ckquail05/18/16

"He" is in fact a she who binds her chest and dresses as a man. Apologies, perhaps that was too subtle to come across.

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by KumquatMay05/20/16

Awed.

I was confused at first but realized, when the Captain's tight top revealed Captain was female... Wow! Your phrasing & sensuous descriptions make for a wonderful reading experience. You're an emotive writer, able to share experience & beautiful visual imagery simply. It's a pleasure to read a finely crafted story. 5 enthusiastic & enchanted stars. Your writing is stunning.

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by mab466405/20/16

Great Story

I must admit, I missed the hints the first time I read the story but in rereading it, I caught them. You did a masterful job of being subtle.

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by sinisterout07/04/16

Yet another reminder of my preconceptions.

Nicely done.

I keep trying and failing at being open minded.

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