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by jthserra03/21/04

Once again...

I am amazed at your phrasing... so intriguing. Excellent poem... mirror as time travel - wonderful. "deep as shallow heaven." inspired ending. Very good.

jim : )

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by LeBroz01/17/07

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An intriguing look at and comparison of a mirror and water; not always an easy poet to grasp. Took a couple reads to really enjoy the flow of words here.

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by duddle14602/08/07

Timely

Mirrors have an innate honesty that can't be denied. What you see is what's there.

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by LeBroz02/21/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.



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by tazz31705/15/12

ACCORDING TO SOME

mirrors are leaks between spaces. TK U MLJ LV NV

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