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Ew
Just some racist cuck shit. Move along
not worth wasting electrons on
only man hating bitches could even like this shit
Not My Bag
Not a good read, there are many stories here of wife sharing and so called cuckoldry, not my lifestyle but many are entertaining. There are many fetishes and many people have them, there are men who like to watch their wife with another and many who like to dress in lingerie. Why are some so abusive to such stories, surely a fetish is a fetish whatever that happens to be, maybe some commentators have inner insecurities that makes them react this way, I don't know, enlighten me.
In Texas
In Texas we don't go for the "moronic short form" stories. Although I guess it's a blessing to put such idiocy in a compact package.
I've got cattle that could write better stories. Hell, the characters remind me of prairie dogs. Or maybe tumbleweeds.
fifteen 16
Like you I wish I knew why this kind of story brings out such hatred from so many.Post a B.T.B story and so many love it.I also wish why..
WHY ARE PEOPLE POSTING FETISH SHIT HERE
Stop it. Besides, the story is terrible!
5
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!
trash
less than worthless story, at least put it in fetish.. below a 0 it's a - 5
5
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote! You know him better as the old ugly fat lonely asshole fag with ED dear annony!
IR belongs in IR not LW, and gay belongs in gay
1*
Oh Brother
Just another typical slut,sissy, cuck and black story. Score 1. O Brother why even bother.
Read the first paragraph
That was as far as I got. No can do. Sorry.
Reading the comments, the choice was the right one.
1*
to offset that cunt bonnietaylor. For you to give a story like this five stars, speaks volumes of your mind set, if you even got a mind.
In case you didn't know it
there is an Interracial Category, please use it. Don't come to loving wives with your cross dressing, interracial bullshit. Have you lost your fucking mind?
1* in honor of that fucking whore of lit bonnietaylor.
one star
Not to offset moronic bunnie/vestie but because I can't give it a zero.
Why?
Why did a woman stay married to a man that confessed he would like to be a woman? Just because he was a good provider? How can anyone be happy with such a life? This woman hadn't any self-respect, any self-esteem...At leat the man got what he always wanted: to be feminized!!! 1*
To the author
This story can be put in either of 3 or 4 categories, Interracial, Transsexuals / Crossdressers, Loving wives and I saw a comment that said to put in fetish, I'm not too sure about that one. Maybe for a second story you can focus on a specific category. For a first story it has a lot of holes, first: no description of the characters, no background of them and a hollow ending, and a weird subject (ball less, cuck, crossdressing husband, dominant wife and a black bull, cliche after cliche?).
I almost forgot, if you can get an editor to review your work it will be great.
Very puzzling use of your time.
You must have more than you know what to do with. Time that is. Writing talent? Not so much.
And they're still married? WHY?
She shows him by her words and actions that she has no love or respect for him. She demeans, degrades and humiliates him. Why would she want to be married to someone she obviously despises? Why would he want to stay with such a shrew? If she castrates him, she goes to prison for the rest of her life so that made no sense. Just get a divorce. There was no point to this mess and as others have suggested, it would have been better off posted elsewhere. Not good at all.
1 star.
5
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 votes. This old ugly fat lonely fag with ED reads all of these LW stories and then votes 1. So I'm helping to offset his fucking `1 vote
5
to offset the old ugly fat lonely fag dear annony's 1 vote This pig reads every one of these stories and then votes 1. I'm offsetting his 1 vote.
Usual
anti-white male racist stuff for a great chunk of entries for this site, unfortunately. Would such overt racism directed against any other race be allowed? Would any other group apart from white females delight in destroying the confidence of males of their own race? Gave it 1.
The guy needs a shotgun...
bonnietaylor
Your standard comments are getting old and tiring to read. Try something more interesting for a change. Exactly what are you trying to proof? Whatever it is, it's not working,otherwise you wouldn't be posting your usual bullshit on every story posted in loving wives.For every biased five star rating you give, I venture to guess that there are twice as many one star ratings offsetting you, so what did you accomplish. Nothing.Are you really that stupid to not know that? I guess you are.
You must be from North Carolina
Homeland of the Racists. There is no place for the glorification of racism in readers reviews and most certainly in writers stories. Your nom du plumb has been tagged accordingly I will not be opening any of your future hateful stories
WHAT A LOAD OF BULL SHIT ARE YOU A MAN OR A HAS BEEN
I agree with other comments here
Its pretty sad when people get off humiliating others especially who is supposed to be their husband. Honestly, who even enjoys this crap? You call this creativity? I'd laugh right in the writer's face. As for the wife, what a whore.
1*
in honor of that cunt bonny/vasty
I loved the story!
I wish my wife would treat like that.
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