All Comments on 'His Myth of Love'

The "staring at the sun" metaphor was particularly effective.

Shiva-Lingam !!! 5-ed , Mer .

...This is a keeper Mer. Absolutely love it.

it hurts you the moistest" TK U MLJ LV NV

this is lovely. Carefully structured and gripping. Very effective. Five

This poem has such fluidity. It flows like a river. My favorite line is: 'a marine layer of "I wish..."' So pretty.

Every time I read this poem the experience is different. The reality of the poem is fluid for me while the structure is solidly polished.

I enjoyed your myths of love

Thanks for giving this Ah experience