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Rough Cut Ch. 13

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by Anonymous03/31/04

exciting

I liked the start of this story, bt it's getting even better now. This was one exciting chapter.

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by Anonymous06/13/04

Impressive

Not much sex, but this is one of the best chapters I've ever read on this site. Your Moe character is a real hero.

Superb story, Desdemona, and brilliantly written.

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by Anonymous06/25/07

Awesome

This story is fantastic. I can't wait to finish it.

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