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Excellent Start
I think you've captured a quintessential experience growing up. I know I had something like this happen. I look forward to more of your wriring!
1/2 of a
am i missing something here or did i just read a 1/2 of a story..? is there more to follow.? is this the end of the story.? am i just dreaming or is this real.?
Wow..!!!! i gave it a "3" as i don't even know what is going on ! oh well.**
RE: 1/2 of a
I would have assumed me putting "Ch. 01" in the title would have let you know that this wasn't the end of the story. It is the first chapter in a longer series. I'm sorry if this confused anyone else, but I assumed that it was pretty clear.
Glad this is only a Chapter One!
It "ended" suddenly, so I scrolled back up to be sure. It IS an odd place to change chapters, but it does leave quite a bit of anticipation.
Boo...Hiss...
worst story i ever read, sounded like a chick flick...yuk!
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