It was a bit confusing, but it was good! Pls clear the characters up in the beginning. Maybe I'm a sexist, but I thought Ashlee was a female for the longest, lol. But great job! Loved it.
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Anonymous05/20/16
WTF?????
Right from the get go it was confusing as all hell. Ashlee/Alexandra are both fucking girl names. It took a couple of minutes to figure out Ashlee is a guy with a girl name. 1 star, just because you are a moron.
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Anonymous05/20/16
Rednecks ???
Ahh you have to love the lowlife that's writes this and the rest of the idiots that read it. Did you finish high school ?
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Anonymous05/20/16
1 star just
because you had guts to post such crap
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Anonymous05/21/16
Moronic
As per usual. This writer thinks tenses are things that just happen to other people, and just for the record, who the fuck was who? And why should anyone care?
Muddled, moronic, mindless, micro-brained, mordantly misbegotten and just plain stupid.
English
I'm confused
Who is who in this story?
It was a bit confusing, but it was good! Pls clear the characters up in the beginning. Maybe I'm a sexist, but I thought Ashlee was a female for the longest, lol. But great job! Loved it.
WTF?????
Right from the get go it was confusing as all hell. Ashlee/Alexandra are both fucking girl names. It took a couple of minutes to figure out Ashlee is a guy with a girl name. 1 star, just because you are a moron.
Rednecks ???
Ahh you have to love the lowlife that's writes this and the rest of the idiots that read it. Did you finish high school ?
1 star just
because you had guts to post such crap
Moronic
As per usual. This writer thinks tenses are things that just happen to other people, and just for the record, who the fuck was who? And why should anyone care?
Muddled, moronic, mindless, micro-brained, mordantly misbegotten and just plain stupid.
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