You ended way too suddenly, and it kind of killed the story. If you continue to write please don't rush and if this is going to be a series (I hope it is ) please be patient, as your impatients shows.
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Anonymous05/20/16
Great
This would make a much more entertaining pantomime !!
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You ended way too suddenly, and it kind of killed the story. If you continue to write please don't rush and if this is going to be a series (I hope it is ) please be patient, as your impatients shows.
Great
This would make a much more entertaining pantomime !!
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