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by dreamsweet03/23/04

a portion

This one is like looking at a small piece of a tapestry, or opening to the middle of a book and reading just enough.

I liked the line "climbing up the light scatter." :)

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by jthserra03/23/04

Oh yes... once again

you've done something magical. The words flow so easily.
I loved the lines:

"flashlights search the sky
climbing up the light scatter
until the swirled staircase ends
in mist and glow"

wow... such poetry. Excellent poem.

jim : )

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by Mia Moore03/23/04

Mistress

of images, I crown your new tittie, I mean title :) I love the way you write, I know, this is crappy fb, but theres not much left to say anymore except I love it... ;)

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