Sister to the Rescue Ch. 05

Short but potent

This can go in so many directions from here, keeping my fingers crossed for mom to get it on with her book club friend, John to dump Alison for good, and Mandy coming home back in full need of her brother. The only thing topping it off would be for their mom to know it all and be supportive, she did drop some hints regarding that already ;)

5*

Leading us ... where?

I like the way you set us up to expect different things ... sister; girlfriend; mother; mother's friend. Many possibilities - I can't wait for the rest of the story.

Brilliant start

Reading the previous comment they seem to want the usual incest cheating type story.But everyone does that.
I can tell you from experience par ants finding out is never good in real life.I was born in Alabama and my mother American,my father worked for British Aeropace in Hatfield,England but was working in the US.He met my mom and had me.They never married.She left him because he hurt her and stole me from her taking me back to England with him to spite her.When he died I was 16 and my mom told me she was not my mother but stepmother and my mom was in the US.I tried to ting her but she had left the address she had given me.I went to the US embassy in London who found her and gave me her telephone number but not address in case she didn't want me, they said they had not contacted her that was up to me.I was told that as I was US born I could have a US passport which I did and they gave it too me the next day.They gave me a one way airfare to New York.
I rang my mom and told her I thought I was her son and she fainted she was so shocked.A girl came on the phone and when she heard my name she told me she would come and get me from New York and I had to wait at a hotel for her.She was my sister that I did not know existed.We fell in love and told her but she took a long time to accept it then only because she did not want to lose me again.We got married when I was 23.Please try and make the story real as it makes a better story than some sank story.

Great story

Loved he story can't wait to read more chapters to it. Keep up the good work.

Yes, a HOT Mom, sister and girlfriend.... sounds like Mom is interested in her son maybe. His sister I think wants something and of course the girlfriend. Sounds like maybe some competition among the 3 girls ??? I hope we get to read about various events along that line. Cannot wait for more ..... thanks.

Just wish the chapters were longer.

Great story thus far, but one page chapters really do kill the mood your trying to create. having longer chapters will not only draw the reader in more into the world you're creating it also helps with the voting. People on here tend to vote lower for short chapters and stories. I like the story and want it to continue, but its better to take longer for each chapter and have the chapters be 2-3 lit pages long then to just quickly write a chapter to submit it. I am also a writer and I'm just giving you some friendly advice.

Lol, Brilliant Start's life-story sounds exactly a story Ive read in this section, with a few edits, hehe.

Yeah, mom might be eyeing her strong boy, but sisters and girlfriends can learn to share! ;). Im surprised he didnt get on the computer and look up a synopsis of that bookclub book from her friend before going back to fence work, hehe.
Think I would have gone to lowes or home depot and rented a gasoline posthole digger, digging in clay sucks! Thought i would dig out the 6x6x6 concrete foundation hole for my tower out back... Dug for about ten minutes in the clay, went inside and hired a backhoe to do it, hehe.