The love for Jazz and her love for him is obvious. It will be interesting to see how you reconcile all the different romantic possibilities. I definitely see a chance with the games becoming so popular for him to start visiting Australia and for Jazz to come back to the states.
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Anonymous05/17/16
Excellent
As per your usual high standards, it was an excellent read. I do miss some of the wry humour that was part of your earlier stories. Not complaining as I really love your work.
English
Good angst
The love for Jazz and her love for him is obvious. It will be interesting to see how you reconcile all the different romantic possibilities. I definitely see a chance with the games becoming so popular for him to start visiting Australia and for Jazz to come back to the states.
Thank you
Excellent
As per your usual high standards, it was an excellent read. I do miss some of the wry humour that was part of your earlier stories. Not complaining as I really love your work.
*****
Another good one.
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