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this was well written, and I am sure tess deserved it but it should have been her husband who got the punishment first not tess, I skipped the middle part, not a fan of that kind of punishment
not sure
seems t me you keep changing your style
sometimes i wonder if more than one person is writing this ..
not a fan of the ending chapters
Thanks for your comments
Jenorma - Don't worry. John will get his. Brenda was just reacting to the news.
Anonymous - While I am sad to hear you don't like the ending chapters to my stories, I'll take it as a compliment that you feel my style changes. I try to vary up my descriptions and scenarios to create something exciting and new for the readers.
This is amazing .I want more! !
very nice writing
I love the idea,theme, but yes the chapters could be longer, they are erotic tho...
Okay, you almost redeemed yourself
with this one.Nothing wrong with a good spanking, and Tess did get off (NOT LIKE THAT), lightly. Coach could have exiled her for life. Can't wait for John to get his, especially since I don't like guys in my Lesbian stories to begin with!
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