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Seeking an Original Thought

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by Anonymous

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by Liar03/23/04

It's not easy...

to tell a story right all the time. A good portrayal of that frustration.

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by echoes_s03/24/04

The challange

to take out bang...and describe it with an anology perhaps, and the repetitive words words words/tap tap tap, using both successively stuck out a bit, but otherwise, this poem is beautiful and complete. :rose:

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