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Very nice work
Excellent characters, fine dialog and description.
Well done.
Thank you for your feedback.
It is much appreciated. :)
Excellent.
I am really enjoying this. I can't wait for more.
I nearly never cruise the mind control genre and I just randomly stumbled upon this chapter. I have since gone back and read the rest. Very enjoyable. Keep it up.
Favorite so far
but honestly I can say that for each chapter. I really liked the interplay between Cassea and Deres. It's been nice to see him involved in the story again.
Damn good!!!
Deres is the man. It would be nice to see him and Bryana do a joint op (and if they have and I just haven't gotten that far yet... ignore this)
Keep them coming.
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