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Brian's Sweet Slut Pt. 04

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by Anonymous04/02/04

OK, I'm hooked!

I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. Through all the parts so far, the temp has stayed scorching! Keep it up...

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by odie12104/24/04

more

This is a great story - keep it going ---

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by Anonymous08/22/04

MORE!!!

This is a great story. Just need more adventures. More men. Both black and white!

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by Anonymous12/06/04

Great series

This story was a great success overall. Very erotic and thoughtful and loving in its own way. Thanx for all your submissions - past, present, and future. This is one appreciative fan.

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by Anonymous09/29/05

Loved it

One of the best stories out there. Keep writing good stuff.

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by Anonymous11/28/05

MORE

Want more from this series, keep Brian and sara together and you will be very successful!!!!

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by romeuoldman07/19/06

Freedom and true

This serie have two marvelous hope for all people: freedom and true. I can say that because I knew a couple with the same kind of relantionship. Of course, diferent of fiction story; they were not handsome, neither high class, only common people without formal education but with a great capacity of work, respect and love. So the author bring us with a work about reality, freedom and true. I loved it. Thanks a lot.

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by Anonymous10/20/06

COMMENT

SHE IS THE ULTIMATE WIFE!!!!

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by Anonymous03/18/07

Awesome

rgjohn is an excellent writer; both of sexual details and the emotional buildup and excitement than can come with MFM 3-ways. Sara is a wonderful tease. As a writer he captures the essence of "sloppy seconds" in a very elegant and impactful way.

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by Anonymous10/19/08

Terrific Story

Great story. One of the best

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by Anonymous10/25/08

loved this series

More please

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by GRYFANx12/26/08

Awesome work

This is a terrific series of stories. I'd love to see it continue!

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by ginandtonic02/02/10

What fun!!

Very hot -and well written!
I especially liked the DP scene.
It's so much better when everybody cares about each other :)

I found the dynamics between the couple and Patrick to be very realistic. Adding a third person can be complicated, especially in the beginning when each new nuance shows itself.
I'd love to see more of these folks! There are so many great combinations for MMFs who enjoy each others' company... maybe they'll work up to a nice hot, loving MMMF?
And/or let Terry's wife in on some fun? I hate to think of anyone being left in the dark, between the dishonesty and the sexual doldrums.

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by leoguy02/11/11

Well written and engaging.

Thanks for bringing us up to date. There is obviously room for much more ahead and I hope you add to it.

I really like stories with creative twists more than just erotica.

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by nvaguy2903/11/12

Bring Patrick back

Please bring Patrick back to Sara and Brian......and as Sara's other husband/lover Patrick)....cover their building relationship....and allow Patrick to share her.....as Brian did with him .....but this time......the man he shares Sara is Tyrone......a handsome.....young black man......whom Sara can not resist falling in love with......the lovemaking should be off the chart.......and who knows.....she may even become pregnant with Tyrone's baby.....

The emotional attraction of Sara for Tyrone.....along with Patrick's love for Sara along with Brian's love should be more than anyone can resist.....

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by nvaguy2903/14/12

BBC for Sara

After Patrick returns, he shares with Sara and Brian the fact that he had shared Sally with a black lover, and he convinces Sara to give herself to that same man.

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by oldtwit05/15/12

Wow

What a great forth chapter this was, up to the same great standard as the first three were, great reads that are well thought out characters are well made up, I'm sure that along with many others I'll be looking for more from you and your great writing.

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by DACharlie02/01/13

My wife is also a slut

My wife is a blue eyed blonde with a killer body. And, she loves to fuck. When she is really turned on she will do almost anything. I have filled all her holes and her mouth with cum many times. Did I say that she is a real "squirter"?

I watched her fuck my best friend one night on our living room floor. They must have fucked for an hour as she first blew him and he then filled her pussy with cum. The climax was when he then fucked her ass.

When he was finished, I then joined in by fucking her pussy. It was one of the most erotic experiences of my life.

She continued the relationship for several months and would come home afterwards and tell me all the details of what happened.

I was in a relationship with two other women at the time but still have time to fuck her on a regular basis. What a life I've had!!!

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by Anonymous10/31/13

thnx for hot story

plz continue the story .

It would be amazing of Sara feminise Brian or Brian only gets to fuck her when there z another dick close around to touch his dick

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by taniwha6006/06/15

A Wonderful Story

This is the type of "wife watching"/cuckold husband story I prefer to read. No "Tease and Deny"; no forced chastity; no whips or canes; no verbal humiliation; no over-bearing Alpha male boyfriends.

Keep up the good work.

I wish you would be able to illustrate your stories as yo did in the "Mother and Son Life-Changing Trip to Switzerland."

Please We need a few more chapters to this story. I would love to see Patrick become a full-time member o the household and for him to have a permanent place in their marital bed

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by Bigjon9097409/30/15

Ending? Wanting more! Great story!

I'M hoping there is more cumming! I'm not ready for this story to be over!

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