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...Of the Life of D

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/21/16

The problem here?

Is that it is such an unlikeable story I don't care to read anymore.

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by teedeedub06/02/16

Bring it on

I can't wait to read more. A lot of us 'non-military' types have had all the same experiences. Not blood and violence but chaos and disaster just the same. I like your rather 'eccentric' style and don't look here for raw sex. Stay with the formula.

"you were miserable as a child,
and you're even worse as a man......"

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by sbrooks103x11/23/16

Sequence

When stories are linked together, some indication of their sequence would be helpful.

I suppose I can go by posting date, but why not use a common title with unique sub-titles or something?

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