Abandoned with the Enemy Ch. 02

Waiting

For the last chapter to post, as I don't want to do any spoilers. 5*

@ TJSkywind

Thanks. :-)
There has been a missing semi plot point in the first half which I've written in a new version and thanks to Dan's feedback I'm thinking about another bit to add, and then I'll upload the new version to Amazon and Smashwords, so keep an eye on your library.

I truly like this story.

So far the story is pretty interesting. You did great work on the character background story info. I thought it helped to give us a better idea of what life was like for them. It also revealed why the daughter was on pins and needles around him. I look forward to the next chapter.

Big Girl Panties

I would love this story to continue with her getting everyone (alpha, Lucas, etc) and just tell them, I know you aren't telling the truth, Roxy says this, alpha says this, etc and just lay it all on the line. A heroine that is a grown up intelligent woman.

I don't even care that there hasn't been any sex yet. This story is just awesome. I can't get enough of these characters.

Another winning chapter!

More please, may we have some more?

Great buildup so far.

Thanks.

make it hppen

This story line is as good as any I've seen in published novels. If you keep it without sexual scenes and finish the entire story I recommend you publish it in a book. Just some advice from an amateur publisher. Wattpad.com is a site you can draft publish for advice on the story so I want to see you make it happen

Good Story

About human beings masquerading as Aliens but a great way to analyze our culture!

Nice plot

It's a good read with a smooth buildup and adorable characters

Anonymous

like it a lot.So much potential for great story

Keep em comin.

Very fun read but... is the freekin cat/dog psychic?