Your male character seems to know so many ways to hurt...so many....:-)
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06/02/04
Superb
Claire B: this was excellent, both for the erotic and the writing. I like the "voice" of the narrator including how her lover might be feeling or looking, very good technique there. Also appreciated no body type descriptions but the inclusion of stuff like the Berber carpet, the finger sucking, and her jeans bunched up at the end. I rarely give 5's, you got one! I'll read more of you ASAP. - Perdita
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Anonymous10/22/04
Oh la la
Not one to visit too often I come here for ideas on what next to try
This is my first comment / rating, Claire you paint a beautiful picture.
Next time around I'll keep my eyes open for your stuff. Considered working with scripts ?
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Anonymous11/14/04
OHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beautiful dearie
now i need to masturbate
pleasurable_contractions@yahoo.com
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Anonymous03/20/05
i want one
it was really hot! sent it to my guy friend and suggested i needed to be punished.
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Anonymous06/30/13
Nice!
Well written and exactly my kink, so five stars! I will read this one again.
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Anonymous02/27/14
One of my favorites
Claire,
This had great build and tension with a satisfying climax for both the characters and your readers. It had the perfect blend of dominance and tenderness. That spanking turned rough anal sex was HOT.
Thanks for sharing this.
English
Spanking and anal sex vividly portrayed
Superior! An excellent description of a moment in time. Thank you.
Wow.
Holy moly, you do write well.
incredible
Excellent!!!
Hrm...
Your male character seems to know so many ways to hurt...so many....:-)
Superb
Claire B: this was excellent, both for the erotic and the writing. I like the "voice" of the narrator including how her lover might be feeling or looking, very good technique there. Also appreciated no body type descriptions but the inclusion of stuff like the Berber carpet, the finger sucking, and her jeans bunched up at the end. I rarely give 5's, you got one! I'll read more of you ASAP. - Perdita
Oh la la
Not one to visit too often I come here for ideas on what next to try
This is my first comment / rating, Claire you paint a beautiful picture.
Next time around I'll keep my eyes open for your stuff. Considered working with scripts ?
OHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beautiful dearie
now i need to masturbate
pleasurable_contractions@yahoo.com
i want one
it was really hot! sent it to my guy friend and suggested i needed to be punished.
Nice!
Well written and exactly my kink, so five stars! I will read this one again.
One of my favorites
Claire,
This had great build and tension with a satisfying climax for both the characters and your readers. It had the perfect blend of dominance and tenderness. That spanking turned rough anal sex was HOT.
Thanks for sharing this.
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