Game of Power Ch. 04

Well I thought it was worth waiting for.

As was the opportunity to get the first comment in :)

Loved it.

This update was awesome. I really love the way you write. Just wish the updates were sooner. I thought you had given up which I actually found quite upsetting. So happy that you plan to carry on!!

Welcome back

Nice to see another chapter for this lovely tale. Its strange how even after a year the title of the story was enough to resonate with me to check it out. I usually don't bother with stories that have already gotten a few chapters under them before I got to them. Be sure on your next release that you have a good teaser description to remind people that the wait is worth it.

Hmm...but will you continue

Thanks for the post but I guess my question is why is it taking so long to post. This is neither a complicated or intricate story line. I like it a lot but if you're no going to post more often than once per year what's the point? I look forward to your next post but if it's a year from now I won't bother. Keep up the good work 4* for dragging it out so long.

Wolf_Man_1962

My only problem so far is that while I try to sympathize with her, she just convinces me more and more that she's a spoiled brat. Maybe that's the point? But it's pretty annoying. But damn 2 years for 4 chapters. With how frustrated she has me at the moment, I don't think I'll be able to read this part by part, having to suffer through her complaining until she finally stops.

The story has so much more maturity since the break.

The characters were a little one dimensional before but now there are a few layers to them. Airani is still a spoiled brat but you can see it's mostly out of necessity and circumstance and less by choice. She's still going to have a hard time letting her true personality be seen, but it will be good for her. Colton still seems a little too good to be true... sweet country boy, patiently waiting for her. I'm waiting for her to do something wrong and him to be angry with her. Not only does it seem inevitable, with their differences, but it will actually make her respect him more.

I'm looking forward to more of this story, though I find sporadic posting extremely annoying. Could you please let us know if you plan to post regularly? Otherwise, I might wait for the story to be a little further on before I get invested.

Please continue

The story you have started us on is a good one love the characters. Can't wait fir more please

Mooore!

I need more. I'm so engrossed in this story already!