All Comments on 'Emily the Tease Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Emily can't help herself

She will always be a slut but she has Ian truly tied around her little finger.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Continuing?

Thanks for coming back to this story. What made you decide to continue it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Glad to see Ch 5

What a surprise to find a new chapter after so long. Thanks and please keep it going. Thought this one ended a bit prematurely. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Well-written tale of lust and weakness

A well-written but ultimately depressing tale of male weakness and female selfishness. It's hard to feel any sympathy for Ian as he just sits back passively and allows Emily to ignore and humiliate him over and over again. He neither admits his sexual inadequacy and fully embraces the neutered cuckold lifestyle nor does he show any willingness stand up to Emily and demand that she alters her ways.

Well written but...

LA

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