The Link Pt. 02: The Hunted

You're back!

Yessss this was goregous. Stayed up til 3 am reading.

Awesome, had to stay up to read it all this morning

Can't wait for the next installment.

Fantastic

Awesome. Could not stop reading

God your good.

It's scary.....thanks.

Beautiful.

With tears !

Uh huh.......

Ditto! More, more, more..........

I'm linked

I couldn't stop reading. When is the next series? I read it the moment it was uploaded. You need to be a novelist. I would quickly buy all of your works! Thank you for sucking me into your worlds. I wait on the edge of my seat for what comes next.

Oh boy

you are sooooo fcked

i hope you realise you will be inundated with feedback & requests for a timeframe on when that next part of this story will be available .. ohhh yeah and comments telling you how much this part was enjoyed

5 stars .. thankyou for sharing it with us

Damn it.

Best author on Lit. Hit it out of the park good sir. Can NOT wait for the next installment.

5 stars.

Awesome.

Yep its what I said.

Next Episode

I enjoyed this episode and anxiously await the next. I am not sure that only one more will be enough. I believe you have developed enough possibilities to have several more episodes. Thanks

Excellent

You have a truly unique gift, the ability to write great stories in many different categories. It doesn't matter if it's science fiction, historical, or modern day, the story is always great. While I want you to continue to post stories here, your talent really needs to be shared with a greater audience.

Dammit DC You did it again!

Now we have to wait to see how this fantastic novel plays out! Oh well, it will be worth it, I bet

Calgary Campers

Wow!

Wow! Did not expect a second installment on "The Link", but you got me hooked! Looking forward to the next installment!!! Great writing!!!

I'm missing a night

straight through parts 01 and 02 took longer than anticipated.

oh well, here's hoping 03 arrives soon

Another true gem

Thank you for doing this story.
I kind of dread the arrival of part three.
When it is read, it is over..
"It" is my joy of reading a masterfully assembled story like this..
..the feelings I experience on behalf of the characters you paint in the most vivid colours. Well, the whole experience of being gripped by the throat by your work, and not be released from it until the very last punctuation is read.
I look forward to your next installment, though..
Please be quick about it. I'm addicted.

WOW

1. amazing writing
2. been too long since last posting
3. split them (the chapters)? too about three evenings to read

Need the full book done

If literotica rated on a 10 point scale. I would give this story a 10, or 15 on a 15 scale. It needs to be fully fleshed out into a book. Put on Amazon or such. You should be proud.

Wonderful!

Simply amazing concept. I love your writing and the way your mind works. This has got to be the best collection of stories on this site.

4 stars!

It would have been 5 stars if only for the typos and the name change from Jack to Jerry!! Usually when this happens I stop reading, but I thought this is DC & he's given us his story for free all 18 pages, so yeah I carried on reading right till the end and I thank you for your wonderful talent.

DeandraDee

5* @Dreamcloud

Fantastic but not as great as 1st chapter. But still 5*.
Damn its like movie sequels you give the best goods in 1st installment people expect too much for the next part anyways loved this chapter also.
Waited too long for 2nd chapter. Very nice build up and loved the twist of Corbett returning thats sick man hehehe.
Eagerly waiting for 3rd chapter.I hope you don't make us wait too long like 2nd chapter please complete 3rd chapter and post soon.

Pcthrone

*ahem*

While I realize resorting to meme's isn't always the best way of conveying emotion on the internet, I still think this one fits perfectly.

*memeface*
"fk yea"

5 stars.more if i could.

Definitely worthy of buying as a.book. Please consider posting about 4 or 5 chapters at a time instead 18 or so. So that we can get our fix faster.

Not sure why this isn't in novels/novellas

Too long for this category, and it's pt 2. Is there a part three? Just not that good.

Not up to your usual standards

The editing was two star stuff. When the character's name changes, that's just sloppy. Many wrong and missing words. The writing was not as good as the first part but still very good. Just sub par for you. Still gave you a four.

So I was minding my own business, browing youtube...

Listening to music, & whatnot...

And I came across an English cover done for an opening theme to one particular anime I enjoyed very much.

And I realized that, somehow, it fit The Link almost beautifully. I've got no idea how this happened, because the show wasn't even remotely about something like this, but, well...

The internet works in mysterious ways, I guess?

Either way, here's the link to the page if you want to hear it:
http://tyerecords.love-blossom.net/aldnoah-zer o-2-op/

Great

as usual. but, is it Jerry or Jack? I like the long chapters, but a shorter wait time would be great...... thx for sharing.

A great 2nd part!

Yes I am one of your readers that anxiously awaited the continuation of the story and I see that I have not been disappointed! I guess I wasn't expecting a part 3! lol Keep writing and I promise to keep reading!

Magical

You are going to give me a heart attack if I have to wait very long for the" Link 3".
Great characters and story line. Thank you for your story. And to those few nit picker critics, get over yourselves. This is an adventure story with ESP elements - not an article for some literary magazine.

Left us hanging!

5 stars. Eagerly awaiting ch 3. I wish this story came to a clean ending like ch 1, though!

The Best

You are my favorite author! Always fresh and wonderful reads, with unexpected plot twists! Please keep on sharing with us!

Bravo!

I just finished my 2nd read of part 1 and 1st read of part 2. This is an AWESOME story. Great characters, great plot, twists, turns and surprises. I love your style(s).😀
Thx
R

Awesome!

When you finish chapter 3 you should wrap them up into a book. BUT not before you let us read it. Again awesome story, I'm a big sci-fi fan and this is "dam good", waiting for more! Do not know how much the rest of the "team" contributed but they deserve some attaboys also

Sleep Deprivation

The title of my comment describes the my reading of this adventurous tale that is woven so well. Waiting impatiently for the next installment.

am I the only one

I'm sad for Sam, his bond with stinky is no longer unik.

Without a doubt...

No better author on this site.

Great Read

Like other comments made here, I thoroughly enjoy all of your stories, great style, content and an ability to suck the reader in. My only complaint is you don't write quick enough, I have now read all your stories some more than once and need more to feed my thirst!!

Quality is rare...

...but your work has it for sure. Plot, characters, pacing and the rest of the list. Like most I await the next installment, but don't let your fans drive the car! Take the time it needs and deserves, we and you will be better served :)

SOON PLEASE!

Please post Part 3 ASAP! This is one great story.

Thoroughly enjoyed it

There are a couple of authors that I have followed that have gone on to publish their work for profit and I have respected them enough to purchase their works. Your work, in my opinion is as good if not better than theirs. Should you follow in their footsteps you already have one loyal fan...

Applause!

Splendid!

Outstanding...another reason you are a recognized one of the best!!!

Incredible original story with everything...cannot wait for the next chapter! Please keep on doing what you do so well!

Awesome

Just read both and they are fantastic. I love the long length closer to book format and hope you don't switch to chapters like some of the suggestions.

Breath taking

I have been reading this excellent story almost in one shot. The way everything is described is moving me, it's poetic

Very much looking forward to Pt.3.

brilliant

This is professional quality writing.

The story is compelling, characters are well defined, and dialog is realistic. I am fully invested in these characters and eagerly await the next installment.

If it were printed in hardcover format currently the story would be almost 500 pages. With the next section this will be a legitimate novel. A novel that I would pay money for.

Please excuse my rudeness....

Please hurry up and publish part 3 I am totally hooked and haven't enjoyed a story quite as much as this in a very long time. Thank you for publishing. Enough of my ramblings, they only serve to take up time you could be using to finish part 3. Thanks.

part 3 please !!

eagerly awaiting part 3, working through all your stories but can't move on till "The Link" concludes. I agree with those that say it should be a book.

Book!

I would happily pay for the privilege of reading this. Thank you for the gift of your writing. And your editor. :)

one of the best

This story has me hooked. I could read the continuing saga of stinky for years. Thanks to the author.