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for two days I tried but

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by sandspike03/24/04

Good one...

I love strangers, don't know what kind of lovers they
make, but for a short while thay can juice you up and
send you away happy. This poem juiced me up.

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by Maria239403/24/04

pass the E please...

over here...oh God, this is painful poem and only someone who has done it could ever know the hollow feeling of being there and not **being** at the exact same time..you captured it PERFECTLY, I am sooo sad to say....

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by 03/24/04

Ouch...

Captured the mental aspect of a fling. Nice work.

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by laelia03/25/04

oh...

how you got it just right. A place to visit, but ya wouldn't wanna live there. Thank you SR

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by LeBroz03/20/08

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The essence of the surge of the fling so perfectly captured I can feel it.

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by LeBroz04/01/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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by theognis01/21/11

*****

Five.

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