All Comments on 'Fire in My Heart Pt. 01'

I like your characters and look forward to more chapters.

Please continue!

Would really like to see where this story goes; I hope you continue!

I can imagine Seth without his clothes -- a deliciously hairy man, with hairy chest, hairy abs, hairy arms and legs, and a cock just ripe for sucking and fucking!

Can't wait to read more. As a gay firefighter, I will be very interested in how you interact work and love life.

Hi, thank you for all the feedback. I am pleased to hear you have enjoyed my story, and I will continue it - part two is almost ready.

I am sorry that the chapters are so short and it may take some time to complete this work. My time is limited and I decided it's better to have a shorter chapter out than wait too long to get anything out at all. Please do tell me your opinions in the future as well!

-chiquinquira

Wonderful set up. I enjoy how you build the characters and setting. I'm a romantic, so slow and emo works for me. Of course, I'll be looking forward to some lovin' when you get there.

Please don't forget about Heal Me. I'm invested in that story as well.

dont take any notice of comments that are rude from people who cant do as good as you, this story needs to continue ,lets face it we need good stories on this site and this has the makings of a good story . jonathan

I can't wait for the next chapter. This first chapter really captures your attention and I really look forward to finding out what happens next.

WHAT A WASTE OF TIME

Why would you leave it like that!!