All Comments on 'The Box Pt. 07'

There does not seem to be any point, or plot, to this story. Where's it going, and, due to the shallowness of the plot, who cares? But thanks for trying.

In the beginning the story was really hot but seems to be headed down the "hole".

This is soft porn written by amateur authors. If you want well written polished racy stories then go buy them on amazon.com. personally, I look forward to the next chapter

Sorry but nobody to like at all.

This is porn, dogs fucking in the back yard no reason to be married, you fucked up your kids porn. Nobody to like just really fucked up losers.

Your story feels real, in a down to earth way. Honestly, I think that if you edited for spelling and grammar it would be perfect. Those are mere distractions in an otherwise wonderful tale. It took a bit to grow on me but certainly held my interest enough to keep me reading. I'm glad I did because it got better and better. The scene with where she blew the four guys in the office was exciting! But then so were her trysts with Ben. You built her arousal gradually and naturally, and when she finally broke free it felt right. I like the ending you chose as well- it fits. Having said that, I'd love to read more about Terri and her awakening. I hope you'll continue with her story. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Turn her daughter out and will she recommend marriage to her or tell her to just forget it and be a Call Girl?

It's too much trouble to tell you what a piece of shit this is. So I won't.