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Birth of a Speedster Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/24/16

Say what?

Most convoluted story I've read.

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by Tw0Cr0ws05/24/16

usually

The first chapter is usually where the story background and setting is laid out, and the writer grabs the reader's interest.

There really isn't enough here to accomplish either.

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Also; the tag 'spitting' is usually meant to describe the rough sex practice of spitting in your sex partner's face for their degradation, quite different from not swallowing after a blowjob.

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