If I were Dean this would definitely cause me problems. Vee and the cards are intertwined in Dean's mind. Dean sees the cards as part of Vee's personality and abilities. Knowing that she mislead him about the cards would cause a major rift in his perception of Vee, especially since he still has feelings for Jazz.
However, if Jazz didn't do the board drawings either...
I am the guy whose dice are cursed. Lol I have even tried banishing them to the freezer on occasion. Regardless. Love this story, love your writing, and from what I can see you have a good editor. Please keep writing and thanks for sharing!
Ahaz
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Anonymous05/23/16
please tell me to buckle up my ears before you blow my mind.
That came out of nowhere. I'll bet she really did draw them but used some source as inspiration. Because of that, she discredits the work she put into the cards especially due to her low self esteem issues. I think elements of style and technique would have been too obvious if Jade had done them.
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Anonymous05/23/16
Suddenly worried about Cyn
Amidst all the fuss about Vee, for some reason I get the feeling that Cyn has sold a knock-off version of Amazons to another game maker, meaning that Amazons doesn't get sold. Along the lines of we haven't seen the last of her and she is Jazz's rival so destroying what Jazz put a lot of work into seems like the worst that could happen.
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Anonymous05/23/16
OMG!
That is some twist at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter.
English
Fabulous
Didn't see that coming. But looking back I should have.
I hope this doesnt upset the apple cart. I like dean and vee together. Im gonna be super sad if they goof this up.
Wow, shocked
If I were Dean this would definitely cause me problems. Vee and the cards are intertwined in Dean's mind. Dean sees the cards as part of Vee's personality and abilities. Knowing that she mislead him about the cards would cause a major rift in his perception of Vee, especially since he still has feelings for Jazz.
However, if Jazz didn't do the board drawings either...
Full Marks.
One of my favorites
I am the guy whose dice are cursed. Lol I have even tried banishing them to the freezer on occasion. Regardless. Love this story, love your writing, and from what I can see you have a good editor. Please keep writing and thanks for sharing!
Ahaz
please tell me to buckle up my ears before you blow my mind.
Wow ...
That came out of nowhere. I'll bet she really did draw them but used some source as inspiration. Because of that, she discredits the work she put into the cards especially due to her low self esteem issues. I think elements of style and technique would have been too obvious if Jade had done them.
Suddenly worried about Cyn
Amidst all the fuss about Vee, for some reason I get the feeling that Cyn has sold a knock-off version of Amazons to another game maker, meaning that Amazons doesn't get sold. Along the lines of we haven't seen the last of her and she is Jazz's rival so destroying what Jazz put a lot of work into seems like the worst that could happen.
OMG!
That is some twist at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter.
I think I hate you!!!
5*s for all the chapters... make the next one soon!
Didn't see that coming!
Great surprise, looking forward to the next chapter!
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